Whistleblower
“This
is insane!” Kevin shouted as he followed April, his coworker and best friend,
struggling to catch up to her. “Listen to me goddamnit.”
From
the very moment I was walking on dark-hided street, smelling like piles of garbage
of fish' I could see some features shivering with tears and doing something.
April
turned her dazzling blue eyes at Kevin. Sapphire blue, with just a hint of
emerald green. Like the oceans in the Caribbean, he had thought to himself.
Those eyes were the reason why he had agreed to this madness. A data chip
containing all of Transtar’s experiments, and he was too stupid to see what she
wanted to do…. “Why should I listen to you?”
April replied, her voice dripping with contempt. “You knew all along. You knew
that Transtar was using Russian convicts for human experiments. And to think… I
trusted you, Kevin.” She reached her office, angrily shoving aside a startled
technician fixing the lights, while trying to find her keycard from her purse.
Kevin watched her hands tremble.
I
suddenly felt butterflies on my stomach and not knowing that I was also
shivering, finally I came in front of the creature
“Listen
April, the Russian convicts volunteered. What we did wasn’t, and never will be
brought to court.” The words sounded wrong even as they left his lips. Kevin
put his shaky hands into his lab coat.
With
my cold hand, I hesitantly found my flashlight in my pocket. As soon as I was
trying to lit the light, one woman shouted
“No,
it won’t. But nobody would ever buy Transtar products when this goes public.
The idea that they ‘volunteered’ is a sham Kevin, and you know it. Nobody would
refuse warm bed and food, not when they are in a Russian gulag in Siberia.”
April finally managed to get the door open. She tried to shut it behind her,
but Kevin managed to slip past. She sat down on her chair, breathing heavily.
For a second, they were silent while staring at each other. Finally, she asked.
“Why?”
I
could do nothing but vomit a bit. I felt so weak. I needed help.
Kevin
didn’t answer at first. But then he replied, “The cure for cancer, April. The
Holy Grail. I spent 20 years trying to find it. It was my life’s work. But I
could live with failure. Until six months ago.” Kevin palmed his locket, and
opened the cover. A picture of a beautiful woman stood inside. She stood
smiling, holding a baby tight between her arms. Sally, and my baby girl, Tessa. “Genetic… conditions, make both of
them very susceptible to cancer. Sally has been lying in a bed at Johns Hopkins
for more than a year now. Stage four. And her time is almost up.”
Please....
My stomach hurt so much... But he replied "Get out. It's closed."
April
stared at Kevin. Some of the icy fire seemed to have left her blue eyes. “Is
that why you agreed to the experiments? All the concessions you made to
Transtar?”
"But
sir.... Please give me at least some sort of treatment...”
“All
of it.” He whispered. “Director Yu, he promised that my family will get the
first working cure, as long as I can succeed. I will do whatever I can to save
my family. I… just need more time. Please.”
None
of my business. Shoo!". So here I am, painfully wrinching my stomach,
desperatly needing help, shivering on the road.
April
began to open her mouth, but suddenly the door slid open. Transtar security
personnel began to flood into the office, pointing their guns at the two, while
one of them knocked April to the ground and cuffed her. “Director Black,
Director of Marketing, you have violated article 6 of your corporate confidentiality
contract. You will be detained and handled accordingly.”
Her
face turned blood white. April began to thrash around as if her life depended
on it, and she was right. Article 6 carried the death penalty. “Kevin!” She
screamed. “Don’t let them take me away. Oh please please plea-“One of the men brought
the butt of his pistol to her forehead. She dropped silently, as blood
splattered the cold white tiles.
But
there was a stray cat. It looked at me with its glowing tabby eyes, and then
walked to a narrow alley with its tail in the air, and runs into dark-hided
street.
“I’m
sorry, April.” Kevin whispered. His hand left his coat pocket, in which a phone
had transmitted everything to Transtar Security. Anything for my family.
I enjoyed seeing how you write, adding recognizable references here and there and overall superb with the command of English. The story in normal font was easy to follow and comprehend, and the story itself was also quite nice. But I did have a bit of a hard time connecting between the main text and the text that was spliced in, and honestly I still don't see a clear connection. But great writing! I love it!
답글삭제I agree with Scott above. I'm curious to know where you got the spliced in stuff, as I'm not sure it's very useful for anything at all, let alone complementing what you have in this story. Even the Imgur one had a lot of potential. Anyways, as Scott said, great writing and great outer story. My instinct says the innner story should be something from the man's daughter or wife - showing how desperate he is. So, is this metafiction? Almost, but again, the spliced in stuff basically is a distraction that takes away rather than adds to the story.
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